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-  We already know how to <a href="../p2ptorrents/index.html">share files with BitTorrent client over VPN</a>. While this is secure, fast and convenient, it doesn't make both truly anonymous.
+  We already know how to <a href="../p2ptorrents/index.html">share files with BitTorrent client over VPN</a>. While this is secure, fast and convenient, it doesn't make us truly anonymous.
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-  In this tutorial, we'll configure an I2P router share files using an I2P bittorrent client.
+  In this tutorial, we'll configure an I2P router to share files using the I2P bittorrent client.
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@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ Now verify the status says <b>Seeding</b> and check the details to get the torre
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-Here's the torrent hash. Anyone who has this torrent hash will be able to download it while Alice is seeding it:<br><br>
+Here's the torrent hash. Anyone who has this hash will be able to download it while Alice is seeding:<br><br>
 
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@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ Here's the torrent hash. Anyone who has this torrent hash will be able to downlo
 
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-If Alice wants to keep the torrent private, it's important not to share torrent hash publicly. Alice will use <a href=https://blog.nowhere.moe/opsec/anonsimplex/index.html target=_blank>SimpleX</a> chat to share the torrent hash with Bob:<br><br>
+If you want to keep the torrent private, it's important not to share torrent hash publicly. Alice will use <a href=https://blog.nowhere.moe/opsec/anonsimplex/index.html target=_blank>SimpleX</a> chat to share the torrent hash with Bob:<br><br>
 
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@@ -428,7 +428,7 @@ If Alice wants to keep the torrent private, it's important not to share torrent
 
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-To download the torrent, Bob needs to first open the I2PSnark torrent client and click on <b>Add Torrent</b>:<br><br>
+To download the torrent, Bob needs to open the I2PSnark torrent client and click on <b>Add Torrent</b>:<br><br>
 
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-I2PSnark will now look through the DHT and make a connection with Alice. Once a connection has been made, the torrent will start downloading:<br><br>
+I2PSnark will now look through the DHT and make a connection with Alice. Once a connection has been made, the download will be started:<br><br>
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-As we can see above, Bob's client connected to 1 peer (Alice) and downloads with a speed of 75 KB/s.<br>
+As we can see, Bob's client connected to 1 peer (Alice) and downloads with a speed of 75 KB/s.<br>
 Alice knows when someone's connected to her. Here's how it looks on her side:<br><br>
 
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-On my network it took around 3 hours to send this 1 GB file. It's certainly slower than torrenting over VPN, but the speed may improve over time when better tunnels are discovered.<br>
+On my network it took around 3 hours to send this 1 GB file. It's certainly slower than torrenting over a VPN, but the speed may improve over time when better tunnels are discovered.<br>
-After download is finished, Bob will have the file in <b>/var/lib/i2p/i2psnark-config/i2psnark</b> directory.<br>
+After the download is finished, Bob will have the file in <b>/var/lib/i2p/i2psnark-config/i2psnark</b> directory.<br>
 Both Bob and Alice can now click the "Stop" button to disable seeding (so that nobody else can download the file):<br><br>
 
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